My theme for this assignment was entrances and exits - or, in other words, the points in which characters enter the narrative and left the narrative (and sometimes entered again). Here are what the slides should look like:
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| There was only one other customer, a souse on a bar stool with his back to the door. |
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| A car squeaked to a stop outside and the swinging door came open. A fellow came in who looked a little in a hurry. |
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| [H]e
hit
the floor with his face. After he hit it he might have been poured concrete for
all the fuss he made. |
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| The car outside let out a roar and when I got onto the sidewalk it was flicking a red smear of taillight around the nearby corner. |
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| I unwound the doors and stepped out and there was a tall girl standing there waiting for the car. |
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| I
didn't know him at first. […]
But I
knew the gun he was holding, the .22 target automatic with the big front sight. |
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| The
girl came out through the door. She had her gun in her hand again. |
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| He filled the doorway quickly, pushed me back into the room with a tight grin and shut the door. |
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| I turned and looked at a dark Cadillac coupe parked just off the loading zone. It had no lights. Light from the street touched the brightness of a woman's eyes. |
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| Then
I shut the car door and walked up the street towards Franklin. |
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